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Journal Entry: Fri Jul 14, 2006, 10:21 AM
Welcome to CritiqueMe!

We are pleased to present the following new members to our critiquing community!
:iconlordyoukai: :iconella-enchanted: :iconwarstar: :iconskorc: :iconoosmik: :iconacr0m-a: :iconlondonxpress:


We provide a critical analysis of your work. Our carefully selected members vary from digital artists, to traditional artists, poets, writers, flash and web designers. Any kind of art; we are capable of giving you honest, constructive thoughts. All you need to do is:
post a maximum of 2 links on our comments section, including what genre of art it falls under.
We'll choose an appropriate artist to deliver a critique on your work.If you want to help some other artists along with their work, Join up. We’re always looking for a new perspective.

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~CedricLupin:iconCedricLupin: Mar 20, 2008, 3:33:57 PM
Writing (Prose: Fantasy)
[link]

thanks for your help!

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check out my gallery please!! [link] see if anything catches your fancy.
~silvercolum:iconsilvercolum: Mar 10, 2008, 7:39:21 AM
hi there! i have some tradicional and need some criticism!
[link]

[link]

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~Kovitlac:iconKovitlac: Mar 7, 2008, 6:44:13 PM
[link]
Photography

[link]
Photography

Thank you!!

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~Headsmellspuppys:iconHeadsmellspuppys: Feb 18, 2008, 2:54:30 AM
here are mah 2 things i would love to have critiqued

this [link] falls under the category of cartoons/mixed media

and this [link] is one of the short stories i have written. it falls under fiction/horror

please critique me like no other

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~demonwerewolf110:icondemonwerewolf110: Feb 11, 2008, 3:51:24 AM
i know the grammar is horrible, but its still in the process of being written :blush:

[link]

continued here- [link]

thanks!

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~Wirework:iconWirework: Feb 2, 2008, 10:30:38 PM
Hello i would like some critique on
[link]

(Jewelry)

Thank you very much :)

God Bless
Amadis
~Pahnsden:iconPahnsden: Jan 31, 2008, 4:57:36 AM
critique on any of my peices is appreciated

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~ashkeeatsshemai:iconashkeeatsshemai: Jan 26, 2008, 12:50:11 AM
I'd like to get a critique on Stare, in the Anime section. [link]

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~theidiot117:icontheidiot117: Jan 20, 2008, 10:49:06 AM
'The Idiot'
(Literature, Prose, Fiction)
[link]

'On the Wrong End of the Gun'
(Literature, Prose, Fiction)
[link]

Thanks in advance! It's wonderful that there are those like you who are willing to spend time and effort to help less experienced writers and artists. Thanks again!
~Anachronistic-Writer:iconAnachronistic-Writer: Jan 9, 2008, 8:18:46 PM Mood: Pirate
Hello I would like for my story's chapters be critiqued =)

The Elementum Knights(Literature, Prose, "Teen" Fantasy): [link]

The Elementum Knghts Chaper 3 (Literature, Prose, "Teen" Fantasy): [link]

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=Obsidian492:iconObsidian492: Dec 30, 2007, 6:06:44 PM
Digital (Fractal Art)
[link]

Literature (Prose, Fiction)
[link]

Thanks in advance!

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~AmaryllisHakatri:iconAmaryllisHakatri: Dec 30, 2007, 12:48:50 PM
Anime (Traditional)
[link]

Poetry (Horror & Macabre)
[link]

Thank you very much^^

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(refering to writing fantasy)

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~ParenthesisX:iconParenthesisX: Dec 29, 2007, 5:51:33 PM
I also would love some constructive criticism I am a photographer.

I would be so glad to have some of my work reviewd.
[link]

[link]

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~MionePax:iconMionePax: Dec 29, 2007, 3:30:10 AM
Hello there! I'm glad I found you the critique-part was the reason I joined deviantART in the fist place so please...
I'd like critique on everything but, if you please, pay special attention to Go Bananas and Behind your wall since I'm very uncertain about those two.

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Please check out my gallery! ~MionePax
~star234gurl:iconstar234gurl: Dec 27, 2007, 2:34:09 PM
critiqued! :D

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~ArtFreak17:iconArtFreak17: Dec 27, 2007, 9:05:52 AM Mood: Joy
I'd be glad to read a critique on some of my work:

-"Skeletal"
Traditional Pen & Ink/Macabre
[link]

-"Flaming Axe"
Pop Art/Photo-Manipulation [link]

Thank you for spending the time! :)

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~ApprenticeEverything:iconApprenticeEverything: Dec 18, 2007, 1:20:55 AM
hey id like to get some critque on [link] which is a digital peice and [link] which is also digital.

thank so much guys. i really want to improve!

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~KyleHolland:iconKyleHolland: Dec 12, 2007, 10:44:37 PM
Here are my two works I want critiqued:
[link]
This falls under traditional Art
and...
[link]
This also falls under Traditional Art.
Thank you!
=SioniWinwns:iconSioniWinwns: Nov 29, 2007, 12:48:59 PM
I'd like some CC for these two, both are trditional

[link]
&
[link]

Of course, if there is something else in my gallery (since there are only 10 things in there at the moment!) That you think needs some CC, feel free to leave comments on anything, i've not had anyone give their opinions on my work for a while now, since i left school, i don't have my teacher or class' opinion's anymore :(

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~Sloppisloth:iconSloppisloth: Nov 23, 2007, 11:45:57 AM
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It is a story. A story with writing. I would like a critique please. It is the first chapter of a novel, really. It is satiric, and it involves ninjas, but it is set in present Day Baltimore.
~Critique-Central:iconCritique-Central: Nov 17, 2007, 3:23:30 AM
Just for the record; Critique Central is a new club with the main goal not to receive pageviews and such, but to offer honest and constructive critique. Check it out now and find out if it's something for you!

*Critique-Central

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~rowenabrennavart:iconrowenabrennavart: Nov 16, 2007, 4:44:22 PM
I featured your club here [link]
Let me know if that's ok with you n_n Thank you.

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*morrigun:iconmorrigun: Nov 12, 2007, 4:31:02 PM
Hey.. so i REALLY need help on coloring in Photoshop... I can't do it... or at least I really don't like my current style at all. (I also need color theory but I'll do that next semester) Please help:

[link]

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~Jay72:iconJay72: Nov 9, 2007, 9:33:16 AM
Hi, I'd really appreciate a critique on a piece of writing (editorial):

[link]

Thanks! You guys are great!

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